First Glance Poem by Habib Ullah

First Glance

Rating: 5.0


Walking to the parlor
I see you with ardor

Gazing at you
love is in the dew

Felt the breeze passes by
Your silky hair rose to the sky

Leaves dances in rhythm
As the air passes with us

We will dance tango
Somewhere in Durango

Eyes of yours
Have a story that endures

Like a shooting star in the night sky
Has a glittered path so high

Your smile is bright
Like July summer sun light
While my skin color fades
My soul disappear in your lush shades

Tuesday, February 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: july,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 21 February 2019

Exquisite expression where feelings of a loving heart come so naturally. Thanks, Habib. This is sumptuous. Your smile is bright Like July summer sun light My soul disappear in your lush shades

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Habib Ullah 23 February 2019

Thank you for your nice words

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Kim Barney 20 February 2019

Welcome to Poem Hunter! A good first poem, although some of the rhymes seem a little bit forced. It's obvious that English is not your native language, yet most of your ideas come through loud and clear.

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Habib Ullah 23 February 2019

Thank you for welcoming. Poem hunter is the place to take a break from our busy day, allows you to become mystic

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