Tuesday, July 14, 2015

First Kiss Comments

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I still remember our first kiss
You were shy when i came close
I held you gentle
You grasped the moment with emotions
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Sandile mngadi.
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Dr Antony Theodore 31 July 2016

very fine experience of the first kiss expressed vividly.. very nice poem thank you dear poet.

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Fabrizio Frosini 21 July 2015

I don't remember my first kiss.. but probably it was just like the one you've described in your poem.. :) thanks for sharing greetings from Italy

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Gajanan Mishra 14 July 2015

remembering first kiss, love is really eternal..

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Sandile mngadi.

Sandile mngadi.

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