First Love Poem by Caleb Tukahiirwa

First Love

Rating: 5.0


I became different, different from me
I felt a feeling that made me-,
So weak to move a finger,
Still that I couldn’t say a word,
Shy to smile in my room mirror.
While happier than any man alive
Flying and standing on the ground
Within those beautiful shining stars
I could easily touch the highest heavens
Like kings and queens all bowed to me
I felt rains of love fall on my face
And the airs filled with this great scent
A scent that spelt out the spiritual fruits
It was too delicious, too good to be true
But yes, it was, and here with me
Paradise, a world that only you had made
This that only appeared at your sight
Through your eyes, I saw it all come to life
In your voice love symphonies played
Eventually that day you looked away
So it vanished and never has it come back
For you too have never looked back at me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 04 July 2010

Well written poem on first love good poem, I think if you spent your time commenting on what you read it will serve you better to be better kind regards.

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Nazma Lucky 27 June 2010

wow, , , , , nicely expressed emotion of first love, , , , , it's from heart, keep it up

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Deepthi Vincent 20 June 2010

Paradise, a world that only you had made This that only appeared at your sight Through your eyes, I saw it all come to life.... Eventually that day you looked away So it vanished and never has it come back For you too have never looked back at me You have expressed the feeling of 'Love' beautifully.... really touched my heart...

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