Saturday, January 4, 2014

First Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

The rose blossoms
In the early springtime
Joyous and beautiful
Opening to the warm sun
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Maureen Carey
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Khairul Ahsan 04 January 2014

This is a beautiful, short poem that likens a woman's 'first love' to the opening of a rose bud to a warm sun and blossoming into a beautiful rose. Excellent! I have rated it 9/10.

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