it was the year 2013
when i was in 11th grade
the unexpected girl i had ever seen
but she seemed familiar to me
i gazed at her with little uneasiness
she laughed at me and teased me
that was a signal to me
i smiled back in anticipation
she is the most gorgeous
at least to my eyes
everything was perfect for her
after all, i was in love
thereafter, during every free periods
i loitered around her class
pretending to do something else
but deep down my heart
waiting for my dear
to turn up with her charming face
we grew along
sharing many secrets
her beautiful name
makes me to cherish her even more
and time passed by so swiftly
abruptly, a saw a change in her
she seemed to be lo longer interested in me
she must have found another
her flawless charming face
transformed to a colorless n dull one
i was left in total confusion
such a tragic incident
increases the rending of my heart
the year that followed,2014
i waited for her return
but faith decided
and everything went vain
all i could see was her dull face
she went out of my life
my DEAR,
if you have mercy on me
i still have feelings on u....
wow Dophala Boy...its a nice poem...make sure you get the second one..best wishes from me
Awww! Sweet darling! Don't worry, you'll find your soulmate! :) [3 greatly written btw. :)
The first love was a short but delightful phase of live which might also teach you a lesson or two on what life is. Such episodes make us emotionally strong and create an understanding of human behavior. However, I like this poem.
you know, Dophala boy, it is called ''first love'' just because it's the first in a row.. be sure a 2nd will come.. and again.. and again.. - and how long will the row be depends on you.. mostly.. ;) therefore, look for another girl and keep on writing *.. ;) greetings from Italy
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
ahh..don't you worry, the first break up is bitter yet you will do just fine. a good write..nicely framed