First Love Poem by kalista mccart

First Love

Rating: 4.0


you where my first love
you broke my heart
you where there for me
you said you loved me

i gave you everything
i loved you
i kissed your lips
i loved your heat

you said you loved me
i gave you it all to you
you kiss me
i kiss you back

i love you
you love me but not the same as i love you
i need you to live
you think of me as your sister

i need you to survive
you say goodbye
i'm falling
your to only one who can save me

Tuesday, December 2, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: kiss,sister
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yara Sherif 12 February 2009

it is so beautiful and i feel all what you wrote

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<font color=black>Nagourta 28 January 2009

'Those who fall and come crashing down, like the oceaen waves they will break apart and become but separated droplets in the sea.' -Nagourta

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Fiona Davidson 02 December 2008

Simple and so beautiful...thank you

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