First Time Poem by Marge Piercy

First Time

Rating: 5.0


Love felled me
like a tree the ax
bit through and I
came crashing down
in a waterfall
of green leaves.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 31 March 2020

A lovely poem, dear Ma’am Marge.....10++ Please, read my new poem COMFORTING YOU. Thanks 🙏❤️👌

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 July 2020

Love felled me like a tree the ax bit through and I came crashing dow. What an imagintion. love this. tony

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Dilly Swain 19 April 2021

I appreciate this poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 April 2021

My last response: The Title says it all.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 April 2021

love surprised her, but the end result was nevertheless very good very appropriately formulated. Most deserving as the Modern Poem Of The Day. Congrats! 5 Stars full and to my Fav.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 April 2021

5 Stars full for this impressive poem and to My Favourites. Thank you for sharing, dear Powem Hunter and Team

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 April 2021

A thought-provoking poem, short but very powerful and a beautiful poem to keep. The great poetess is married to Ira Wood, wow! IT Ira Wood. Congratulations on being chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Most deserving!

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Marge Piercy

Marge Piercy

Detroit, Michigan
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