Monday, July 31, 2006

First Time In A Long Time Comments

Rating: 3.8

Today I danced while cooking
kind of slow, hesitant at first
like the kids smiles
watching mom-dad
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alex haywood
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Greenwolfe 1962 20 June 2008

I guess he was stil feeling the affects of the wine when he wrote this piece. I can't imagine him doing it with other than a smile on his face. This writer is comfortable with his work and that makes the reader comfortable too. GW62

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Séamus Fox 01 August 2006

Iam building a picture here having read your first three lost of feeling in these words disguised as normality. This is sign posting were you don't actually say whats going on but make it in metaphors. Séamus

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