Sunday, April 26, 2015

Fixing Broken Pieces Comments

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I say im 'okay.'
When Really I'm Br'ok'en.

The life that I live.
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Jewel Edwards
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Godfrey Morris 25 May 2015

Great poem. Lovely prayer I'm sure your father will answer.

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Marigold Baylon 26 April 2015

This is a nice poem. Amen!

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Kim Barney 26 April 2015

I read the whole poem as a prayer, not just the ending. Great work. One small thing: on the first line of verse seven, you should change YOUR to YOU'RE. Thanks for sharing this with us.

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Jewel Edwards 28 April 2015

Thank You Marigold. And Thank You Kim for that spelling correction (':

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