Monday, June 9, 2008

Flame Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's a burn here
And a burn there
Burn on
Burn me everywhere
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Shaneka Taylor
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Jacky Alex 04 November 2008

sad but powerful! I have great empathy with you!

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Marvin Brato 09 June 2008

Quite sad poem, but I hope that soon such fire burning within you becomes a blaze of love! A 10.

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Shaneka Taylor

Shaneka Taylor

New Orleans, La
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