Thursday, September 15, 2011

Flame Of The Forest, A Senryu Comments

Rating: 3.1

Untamed, alluring
She sprawls herself on bare earth
And sets it ablaze
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Allemagne Roßmann 16 September 2011

And people calling themselves Inferno in it

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Leonard Dabydeen 15 September 2011

Excellent! So much imagination in one breath of three lines. Keep the fire burning.

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Leonard Dabydeen 15 September 2011

Excellent! So much imagination in one breath of three line. Keep the fire burning.

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