Flames Of Life Poem by Bloodshed 207

Flames Of Life

Rating: 4.5


The fire of the soul,
Constantly burning
Dreams and desires,
Keep the flames bright

When hope starts to fade, so does the fire
When dreams die, the fire feeds on memories
But it's not enough to sustain upon
Slowly but surely, the flames wither away

The fire burns itself out
Smoldering remains of life,
The ashes carried by the wind
Soon there is nothing left

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Bored, depressed, what else can I say?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allie Benn 18 May 2012

It was good Justin. Just try and be happier kid. Love you. - You're best friend. :)

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Galia P. 15 May 2012

I like all of your poems, but this is my favorite. :)

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Bloodshed 207 07 May 2012

Thanks, I really appreciate it.

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Dave Walker 07 May 2012

Really like this, a fantastic poem, a really great write.

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