James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Tuesday, July 4, 2023

Flawed Poet's Comments

Rating: 4.0

In a world of verse, where poets dwell,
Two beings emerge, distinct and tell,
One wields a pen, with grace and art,
While the other, in shadows, falls apart.
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James McLain
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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

For sure this poem is NOT my favorite. Of course MOST of my favorites are ones I, Bri, wrote. ha ha. I'm thinking 'I should give 3 stars, no more, & that is what I've done! ! : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

I respect ALL who sincerely come to PH to share their poems, no matter the topic. PH is to be 'praised' for having provided each one with a poem showcase indeed, no matter their age, gender, religious beliefs, etc. etc....though, in poems, PH does NOT allow the dollar sign symbol. : )

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

It's seemed at times, while I read (more than once) your verses, that both 'bad' and 'good' poets did/do have pride for their words, which they don't wish to hide.

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

I confess, I'm not sure what's happening here. I love the rhyming but your lines aren't clear. I'll refain, now, , from calling them , and don't think I'm referencing LGBT et al.

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Bri Edwards 04 July 2023

JAMES, AN APOSTROPHE IN TITLE, NEEDED OR NOT, WILL NOT TURN ME AGAINST YOU, AT LEAST NOT 'A LOT'

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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