In a world of verse, where poets dwell,
Two beings emerge, distinct and tell,
One wields a pen, with grace and art,
While the other, in shadows, falls apart.
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I respect ALL who sincerely come to PH to share their poems, no matter the topic. PH is to be 'praised' for having provided each one with a poem showcase indeed, no matter their age, gender, religious beliefs, etc. etc....though, in poems, PH does NOT allow the dollar sign symbol. : )
It's seemed at times, while I read (more than once) your verses, that both 'bad' and 'good' poets did/do have pride for their words, which they don't wish to hide.
I confess, I'm not sure what's happening here. I love the rhyming but your lines aren't clear. I'll refain, now, , from calling them , and don't think I'm referencing LGBT et al.
JAMES, AN APOSTROPHE IN TITLE, NEEDED OR NOT, WILL NOT TURN ME AGAINST YOU, AT LEAST NOT 'A LOT'
For sure this poem is NOT my favorite. Of course MOST of my favorites are ones I, Bri, wrote. ha ha. I'm thinking 'I should give 3 stars, no more, & that is what I've done! ! : ) bri