Flower Emits Sweet Fragrance Poem by Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India

Flower Emits Sweet Fragrance

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Flower emits sweet fragrance
And from you, my dear,
The environment is purified.
O poet, your feeling, your writing
Are naturally helpful for
The welfare of all beings.

Sunday, March 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lisa Patra 23 March 2014

good concept. but are the first 3 lines well coordinated? 'The environment is purified from you' doesn't express the idea that- the fragrance emitted from your being purifies the environment. Pl reconsider. thanks for giving the pleasure of reading a poem.

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Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
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