For dogs
A woman is a
Lump of meat
For a lust
A woman is an
Object of desire
For a saint
A woman is a
Mother with new light.
Delightful and meaningful too. Line 5 should read: A woman is an Just for the record, our dog loves my wife as a mother, a companion, yes, even a saint. Maybe a lion would be a better beast of prey.
Your poem is beautiful and it is also touching. Women are complex and beautiful They are a heavenly creation that bring love and kindness to our world. They are timeless diamonds.
Dear Mishra, Can we think as follows? For a lust A woman is a Lump of flesh to rape! For dogs A woman is a Mistress to caress! For a saint A woman is his own Mother to worship! V.K.Kanniappan
'A woman is a Mother with new light' I like this. Very thoughtful
For a saint A woman is a Mother with new light....true and perfect!
your poem definitely needs two readings. when i first read your poem, i thought h'mmm, very mysogonistic. on my 2nd reading i realised you were contrasting what a woman could represent to 3 different existences. very simple & clever! ! 👍
The poem written by a poet is the reflection of society, but YOUR POEM does not reflect that, instead your poem lowers a woman’s level/position. LEARN how to appreciate an ordinary woman.
sylvia you are mis-reading the whole concept of his poem. read my comment the 2nd one above, it may help you to understand (& stop ranting.)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dear sir, what is meant by--- a woman is a Lump of meat ....