Sunday, October 11, 2009

Flowers Above Her Comments

Rating: 3.0

Flowers dangling above her,
It's colors pink, green, and brown.

There's nothing but this empty bench beside her.
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Nathalia Hunter
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Kesav Easwaran 12 October 2009

the images you build there lead the reader into a silent subtle grief...nicely drafted piece Nathali...thanks...10

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Christine Schmidt 11 October 2009

I do especially love the image you create here. I love how nature can beautify any place. Keep writing-it appears you have a love for the craft! ~Christine

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009

Your writing is heartfelt and painful, something that I could connect with. Your metaphors are really clear and you have a comfortable way with words that the reader feels immediately.

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