Flowers dangling above her,
It's colors pink, green, and brown.
There's nothing but this empty bench beside her.
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I do especially love the image you create here. I love how nature can beautify any place. Keep writing-it appears you have a love for the craft! ~Christine
Your writing is heartfelt and painful, something that I could connect with. Your metaphors are really clear and you have a comfortable way with words that the reader feels immediately.
the images you build there lead the reader into a silent subtle grief...nicely drafted piece Nathali...thanks...10