Saturday, November 26, 2016

Flowing Stream Comments

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Your voice, lap of flowing stream
Across howling space.
Your face beams a lover's dream
From afar making the heart race.
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Celestine Ikwuamaesi
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Chinedu Dike 30 November 2019

Well conceived and elegantly crafted in a verse with rhythmic splendour. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Celestine 02 December 2019

Feel good reading that you appreciate the poem. Thanks.

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Clarence Prince 26 November 2016

Make your coming swift as rain Waiting for the day isn't fun Living by faith that fetched Me strength to hold on Real lovely words!

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Celestine 02 December 2019

Thanks Clarence. Bear with me for the " early" reply to your comment.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 November 2016

waiting for the day is not fun, good job.

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Celestine Ikwuamaesi 26 November 2016

Thanks, Gajanan reading through.

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