Fly The Coop Comments

sometimes (not much in this poem) punctuation can make a big difference in how a reader interprets/reads a poem. at least lack of punctuation slows me down at times and is a bit of a nuisance. all that said, and without more 'preaching', i say nice job. i wish you and 'them' well. to MyPoemList. bri ;)

i look at your 'birth date' and do math; you are 22 (almost!) on the '28th' of Feb.? ok, at that age you probably SHOULD be flying the coop, ......but thankful you haven't been kicked out of the coop earlier! ! ! (to be continued) ...............

favorite lines: You've got to let go If you want me to grow I'm doing everything I can And I am already everything that I am ..................but everything that I am probably came about, in large part due to the efforts/help of your parents (if this is a true 'story' about you) . ok, maybe not a VERY LARGE part. (to be continued) .................

you were ready to 'leave the nest'? ? i think you wanted Fly The Coop, not Coup, nor Coupe! ha ha. and you have father for farther. a simple typo, though you may have been thinking of 'Daddy' while typing. :) (to be continued) ................