Foggy Disires Poem by Halla Ingimars

Foggy Disires

Rating: 4.5


Whisper
in the foggy night
The voice
of loneliness

Whisper
in the foggy night
The voice
of temptation

Come!
Come!

Thursday, September 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 06 December 2014

This is a beautiful poem of 20 words. Whispers during a foggy night have mysterious connotations which ought to be explored. Thanks for sharing

0 0 Reply
Chinedu Dike 06 December 2014

A pitiful whisper fraught with loneliness, desire, and temptation well depicted in the poem. I like the articulation and penning of the piece as it captured the essence of the piece well. A beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

0 2 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success