Friday, August 15, 2008

Following Daybreak. Comments

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Some daybreaks are followed by moments of awe
As silence suffuses with dawn
Into canopied scene of a lightening world
With the glory of day being born.
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Fay Slimm
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Tango 31 August 2008

You draw a nice picture of a new dawn. One of my favourite parts of the day. Well done, Tango.

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Bob Blackwell 23 August 2008

You have written beautifully of a happy dawn. My favourite times of day are both dawn and dusk. Your poem reminded me of the following: - 'Listen to the greeting of the dawn, Look at this day because it is true life. In its brief time it is the reality of our existence, the blessing of growth, the splendour of beauty.' (Part of a Sanskrit Chant)

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