Sunday, February 14, 2016

For Clifford Bernel Comments

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Lonnie didn't want to eat with Clifford.
I tried to keep my eyes away from his mouth,
Which opened uncontrollably,
His thick saliva oozing over him.
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Chinedu Dike 14 March 2016

Beautiful and insightful narrative piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction with conviction. A lovely depiction of oversight and errors of judgment well depicted in the interesting story. Thanks for sharing Mark. Please read my poem COLOSSAL MISCARRIAGE OF JUSTICE.

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Mark O'Brien

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