Wednesday, May 19, 2010

For Him I Know Not: V (Senryu) Comments

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My dreams never did
Speak that my tears of joy
Will be wedded to yours
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Allemagne Roßmann 20 May 2010

No dream left a clue Dreams never hinted My dreams never did..........................what a continuation of negation in various forms of articulations? WUNDERBAHR! (Wonderful) ... Do read mine--' I HATE LIARS'...........

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