Friday, September 7, 2007

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The rapids shall dry
the forests decay
e’en the mountains one day will fade
ground to dust by the juggernaut that is time
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Michael DeVries
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Michael Ardizzone 07 September 2007

This poem turned in the way i expected, but i felt like it was missing something-the last stanza was not as profound a turning point as I thought it would have been. I enjoyed this poem though. Your images are clear, your wording is deft. The theme may be a little overdone, but this poem is written well enough to be worth reading.

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