For The Unloving World Comments

As I am trampled by the malice Dying in the creek of soundless grace Of life's treacherous melody.. beautiful way of expressing..... finely worded.......... very poetic...... thank u dear poetess. tony

Always the brighter.

A very nice start indeed. Really loved the emotional truth behind this write. Well done. A 10+++

A world that forgot the beauty of kindness Throwing behind all trust and love Into a pool labelled weakness........ how we all search a life long for a little bit of love and acceptance....... such a truth dear poet you have written.. thank you very much. tony

A powerful write written with passion, for sure this is a cruel world and you have said it well. Thank you for sharing and welcome to PH.

A good start with a nice poem, Yung. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.