Friday, October 3, 2008

For You Only Comments

Rating: 5.0

I bestowed a dawn
To you
Onto the pier
All through shady night
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Moushumi moushumi
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Reshma Ramesh 31 December 2008

dawn....charcoal.............in and out superb write

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Kesav Easwaran 04 October 2008

dawns...days...sparking... burning... the end...charcoal nights gathering ashes? well... a mystic write...bitterness coated in sweet poetic lines...10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 October 2008

light of glimpse enlightens the soul heart when accords wamth by sun that mellows passion by elation silhouette still stares slwowly melting into blue by perfection treasures of night bequeaths glow beneath melange of shadow....................wonderful eloquence of love yet fluffs over the texture of fragrance, passionate flow of ripples by the colors over the mist of dawn yet reeling deep within, luscious grin of the green, of unique genre,10++, thanks for sharing

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