Sunday, June 28, 2015

Forbidden Love Comments

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Dangerous, razor like thoughts,
Had me at breaking point, once again,

We speak with silence,
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Hafiz Firuz
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It seems a triangle love! I was hers and she was his...

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Chinedu Dike 30 June 2015

Sincerely speaking, I believe that the pain of forbidden love over rules it's bliss. It's a well articulated poem insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 29 June 2015

A haunting poem, Hafiz. The question is always, Is it worth it? Thanks for sharing. Peace

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Hafiz Firuz 30 June 2015

Thank you! Peace

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