Tuesday, November 10, 2009

Forcefield Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am becoming an adult.
In this becoming, I realize,
That all beauty bears a force field.
The sun, it’s fiery focus,
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 November 2009

this one is very well written. Poetic. Very good.

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rago rago 10 November 2009

well crafed words and made it flow easily...................

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