Rudi de Beer

Forever

a rainbow upside down
a face without a frown
a heart that skips a beat
a cloud beneath my feet
thoughts of stars
and promises of eternity
loyal faithful trustworthy

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 29, 2009
Poem Edited: Thursday, March 4, 2010

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Comments about Forever by Rudi de Beer

  • Kerry O'Connor (7/31/2009 12:23:00 PM)

    I like the idea of having a cloud beneath my feet. Lovely imagery.

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  • Danny H (7/29/2009 8:18:00 PM)

    This is an extremely creative way to express
    Forever
    and it was beautiful.

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