Michaella Jones

Rookie (7/11/1993 / Brandon)

Forever - Poem by Michaella Jones

No matter how many
Times sorry comes out
Of your mouth your
Never fully forgiven

No matter how much you say
I love you, you never really know

No matter how many
Times you hold hands
You never really know
How he fills

No matter how many times
You talk all night
You never truly now everything

So you say u love him
Maybe you do,
So you say you love his touch
Maybe that is true

However I know I loved him
I thought it was true and
Now im crying my soul out

Now my heart has hit its final breaking
Point and no one will ever know
The way I could love them
The way I could be true

My heart full of hurt, but also
Full of lose, however
Now I know no one will ever hear
I love you escape from my
Mouth and into there ears

My life fills over
My heart has exploded
No one will ever see the love that was
Left un noticed


Comments about Forever by Michaella Jones

  • (5/7/2010 10:31:00 AM)


    I really like the last verse, it's a nice ending and sums up the expression of the rest of the poem. I read other of your poems and I enjoyed reading them, but you have a tendency to rush it seems. Try proofreading and fixing errors. You're instead of your, and other common mistakes. I make them too, but they help the feel and flow of the poem if you get rid of the mistakes. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 5, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, May 7, 2010


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