Monday, October 19, 2009

Forget Me, Please... Comments

Rating: 3.5

I wish for you
To think back,
Before the time
We first met,
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Dosvedanya Rashia
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Keith Hendrickson 19 October 2009

your work is soooo impressive. an i swear i barely ever use that word to describe peoples work... i love the way you ended this one. i realy thought my writing was good until i started reading your work. you are 4sure on a different level.

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Amelia Loe 19 October 2009

this poem is interesting in that usually the person who is hurt is the one that wants to forget the other person, you never really think about it from the opposite point of view, that a person would want to be forgotten, maybe in order to save the other from pain, in such that they seem just as determined that you forget them as they would be to forget you.

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