Sunday, November 6, 2011

Forgotten Memories Comments

Rating: 5.0

So many things went by
As the time passed by
We moved to different directions
In search of our perfections.
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Prachi Agrawal
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Harindhar Reddy 10 November 2011

Hello Agarwal! I this jumping rhyme of yours each line is equal sweet as apple fruit. I found hard to pick one stanza came out with this one...... 'I moved a step ahead You left my one hand You took a next step I left your other hand.' Amusing and entertaining poem of yours in a mood reminiscent! Loud cheers!

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Abhishek Tiwari 06 November 2011

Life moves on! New songs heard, old forgotten! New hands held, old given way out..! But so sad, some get rooted in our mind.. As in your case, because you planted the seed together! Lovely expression of feelings!

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