Four Elements Poem by Nick Leow

Four Elements

Rating: 5.0


Fiery as it is,
It lit the world up in a
Raging blaze,
Effacing away every trace of life from the world.

Wanderer of the world,
A shapeshifter of its own.
Thy who cleanse the world,
Enchant it with a shimmering light
Renewing hopes for it.

Evergreen blades dancing in the rain;
A field of lovely daisies sways along in unison;
Right front the nightingale sings a brilliant tune;
The concerto goes on and on without an end.
Happiness shot through our hearts.

Whispers…
Inaudibly to me,
Neglecting her duty once again,
Disappearing only when she is tired…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Haden Chua 17 July 2012

Nice poem with a great layout. The theme is great too.

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Captain Cur 07 July 2012

Excellent poem about the 4 elements with some great philosophy adding a rich fifth dimension!

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