Monday, May 25, 2009

Fragile Comments

Rating: 5.0

Found myself near the shore
Waiting for the waves to reach my feet
Waiting just a little more
For my heart to find peace in it
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Arvie Calimlim
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Jemima Cabanlong 05 September 2009

amazing. the words were well weaved together. awesome.: D

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Nashy Lamen 26 July 2009

The flow of the poem... THe strong emotions, . The beauty of your words.. Very good! ! ... Keep on writing...

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Danzen D. 24 July 2009

Still and moving like the waves...yet I wonder..why are you alone? Nice poem! Keep writing!

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Sky and sea, in other word, wind and waves console our hearts.10.

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