Free Again Poem by Little Star

Free Again

Rating: 5.0


If love has turned to hatred
Why should a couple stay longer together
And everyday hurting each other
You said something like letting go of me
You need not push me away
I can no longer play the part of a fool
So I am heading for the open door
It must be nice to be free
Free from your endless cruelty
Again I feel the coldness
This time, it's not a strange feeling anymore

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 13 June 2007

At some point in our life we come to the realization that everything changes and nothing stays the same. Think about that, there's nothing wrong with that, it's like progress, moving right along sometimes we don't like what is happening what we have no way of stopping it. I think it best to say thankyou to the Lord and be grateful for the good that you experienced when the relatioship was in a better place and also thank him for showing you sadder part of life as well, it makes you stronger and prepares you form many dissappointing times in life. Look back on this relationship with a smile on your face and remember the good times, keep positivity to the forefront and negativity in it's place, far, far in the back unable to peek its head out. I love your poem, matters of the heart is never truly easy to deal with but it can be done by a person like you, who has been given a rather big heart. Enjoyed your poem and look forward to more of your writing.--Melvina--

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