Little Star
Cebu City, Philippines
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Rating: 5.0
So deep the silence
I am drowned beneath
So deafening it makes
The sound of tear dropp could be heard

No one to talk to
But the mirror of my own shadow
Thoughts spoiled with sadness
As blank stares get lost in the empty space
Kevin Carney 06 October 2010
Fabulous poem it's so short it is so heart rendering. I love the line 'The sound of a tear dropp could be heard' I could almost visulize and hear it. Kept thinking about it after I read it.
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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 April 2009
Short and amazing...
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Yonela Mali 17 March 2008
i know xactly what you mean, we all experiance at some point in our lives.Simple yet pierces through the heart. nice read
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Raveendran . 23 July 2007
Beautiful contrasts, fine art...
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Alex Y. 21 July 2007
awww, yes I know the feeling of loneliness is unbearable, you really painted a real picture there, good job! Love the pen name by the way :)
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Marci Made 20 July 2007
Well you're not alone here, can certainly hear 'many' of those 'drops'. This one's a keeper pour moi.........thanks for sharing little star your star of a poem.......marci.xo
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Marvin Brato 17 July 2007
So true, I can relate to it my friend. worth the 10.
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