Little Star

Rookie (Cebu City, Philippines)

Alone - Poem by Little Star

So deep the silence
I am drowned beneath
So deafening it makes
The sound of tear dropp could be heard

No one to talk to
But the mirror of my own shadow
Thoughts spoiled with sadness
As blank stares get lost in the empty space


Comments about Alone by Little Star

  • (10/6/2010 1:00:00 AM)

    Fabulous poem it's so short it is so heart rendering. I love the line 'The sound of a tear dropp could be heard' I could almost visulize and hear it.
    Kept thinking about it after I read it.
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (4/19/2009 1:05:00 AM)

    Short and amazing... (Report)Reply

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  • (3/17/2008 3:24:00 AM)

    i know xactly what you mean, we all experiance at some point in our lives.Simple yet pierces through the heart. nice read (Report)Reply

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  • (7/23/2007 9:46:00 AM)

    Beautiful contrasts, fine art... (Report)Reply

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  • (7/21/2007 1:03:00 PM)

    awww, yes I know the feeling of loneliness is unbearable, you really painted a real picture there, good job! Love the pen name by the way :) (Report)Reply

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  • (7/20/2007 10:51:00 PM)

    Well you're not alone here, can certainly hear 'many' of those 'drops'. This one's a keeper pour moi.........thanks for sharing little star your star of a poem.......marci.xo (Report)Reply

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  • (7/17/2007 4:59:00 AM)

    So true, I can relate to it my friend. worth the 10. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 14, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, March 21, 2011


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