I feel so liberated.
I feel amazingly free.
The weight has been lifted
From my aching shoulders.
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I gave this a 9 because it was a pleasure to read. From beginning to the end it was a perfect joy. The words even had a kind of rhythm within. That is most rare. I well deserved 9. GW62
Beautiful! Freedom is one of my favorite things to write about...it has a nice rhythm and I love the last line: 'and you are my precious pearl.' Great work!