Thursday, July 31, 2008

Freedom Comments

Rating: 4.5

I feel so liberated.
I feel amazingly free.
The weight has been lifted
From my aching shoulders.
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Cheyenne Watkins
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Caroline Weeks 05 September 2008

Beautiful! Freedom is one of my favorite things to write about...it has a nice rhythm and I love the last line: 'and you are my precious pearl.' Great work!

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 August 2008

I gave this a 9 because it was a pleasure to read. From beginning to the end it was a perfect joy. The words even had a kind of rhythm within. That is most rare. I well deserved 9. GW62

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Russel Choudhury 31 July 2008

Brilliant love the sentiment, so true.

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Cheyenne Watkins

Cheyenne Watkins

Columbus, Ohio
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