Majid Gaggi


Freedom… - Poem by Majid Gaggi

Ah you my word of

Seven great characters

F: friend, fancy and fantastic

R: ready, rise, and respect

E: effort, energy

E: emotion, effective

D: dreams

O: obedient

M: morning moon

What great thing starts with these characters?

The exquisite beautiful words

There is no better than being friendly

Fancy with fantastic behavior

Not the coolest of being ready

To respect each one

So that you rise and rise

Try your best effort

And your huge energy

To give great and nice emotion

So that you will be more effective

As such, all your dreams will come true

Being obedient is very good behavior

Morning moon is trying to make you feel better

Where you can see everything

Most beautiful and blessings

Ah yes you my freedom

Yesterday under your name

How many necks have been cut?

How many lives have been ruined?

How much blood was shed?

How many mouths were gagged?

Restrictions and doors were put to you

Do not knock and open

But only with bloodied hands

At this century

Today, with all regret

In our world where ever you direct your face

North, south, east or west

In our dearest East

You will only see

Tragedy repeated and returned

In the name of freedom

Towns and cities were destroyed

Housing and temples were exploded

Innocence, orphaned childhood was killed

And women were widowed

Trees were take off and vegetation were burned

And the life was killed

On the other hand how much

You are pure, beautiful and gorgeous

And tone fragrant

The fragrance of shinny flower

How precious you are

You are the spirit of the man and his breath

You are our chance to be the best

You're the best hope on earth

As Mahatma Gandhi said,

The best way to accomplish

And the completion of each of our business

Hey you, attractive single word

You give to the life its shinny and perfume

If everyone know its meaning

And understand its limits and restriction

And invoked to it and its principles

Topic(s) of this poem: ideals


Comments about Freedom… by Majid Gaggi

  • Aarzoo Mehek (1/18/2016 12:36:00 AM)


    Hey you, attractive single word

    You give to the life its shinny and perfume

    If everyone know its meaning

    And understand its limits and restriction

    And invoked to it and its principles

    Such a big price to pay in the name of freedom... I wonder freedom from what? Before freeing others free your mind of prejudice and hatred. Beautiful and sensitive poem..my compliments.10
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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 18, 2016

Poem Edited: Monday, January 18, 2016


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