Freedom! Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Getting Freedom from pain, fear, tactics is the real freedom....loved it....beautifully narrated....thank u for sharing :)

Prayers, peace and love! For the joy of your heart. Thanks for sharing.

I find the spirit of complete submission here in this powerful poem... great expression. Top score!

Beautiful, beautiful...The reality of this life is often too much to bear. But if we form a bond with God, our troubles simply go away. And true sense of freedom comes from this...when we stop caring about the worldly gains. As long as we are part of the rat race, there's simply no freedom. A spiritual awakening is true freedom. Well done my friend.

The life of this world is nothing but a true story of struggle, at times it is done individually and at times in a group. The struggle to overcome every problem is essence of life, it also keep us moving all the time. I enjoyed reading your poem.........10++++

You write of deep emotional feelings. Sometimes, trying to make such profound feelings fit a rhyme, constrains the full impact. May I humbly suggest trying to let these very personal thoughts flow in the way they occur to you without trying to have to force a rhyme. I do enjoy rhyme, but sometimes it limits the authors scope. You are a creative and eloquent poet, perhaps this could broaden your reach. Peace

The real emancipation comes through our encounter with God! No balm can lessen our pain! No magic potion can effect a cure! Only God can do that.....! Aarzoo, I too firmly believe in the all encompassing love of the Almighty and the relief it gives and the sense of true freedom we come to enjoy. On nobody, we can depend completely for support or solace. Today's friends may turn tomorrow's foes! A lovely poem!