Freedom Poem by Vaness Vandenburg

Freedom

Rating: 5.0


After all the bruise you've unconsciously made
Finally i could run into a glade
Im neither lost nor found
Yet safe from all those rumbling sound
Sounds when my heart tremble
More severe when actions have bitter flavor

Finally I could fly away from the nest of aches and sorrow
Maybe strong enough to face a brand new tomorrow
I'll ask for no more..
Just please be happy for i have saved my dying soul.

Sunday, August 13, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 13 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Vaness. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 August 2017

Finally I could fly away from the nest of aches and sorrow Maybe strong enough to face a brand new tomorrow i have saved my dying soul.... realization that leads to greatness and to inner peace. fine poem. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Vaness Vandenburg 14 August 2017

:) thanks tonyyy

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