Sunday, May 14, 2006

Friendship Comments

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Is a friedship like a candle,
Slowly melting away unnoticed?
Only burning as long as the wick is willing to carry us,
Until the flame meets its end in the hot wax?
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Benjamin A. Wellman
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Pha Thanh Gian 29 June 2006

Great poem, i love the metaphor of candle... touching and thought provoking. Nice work!

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Missy Trinity Ferrari. 10 June 2006

I often wonder the same thing sometimes.. The best i could get was an Ellipse.... for and ellipse is not as perfect as a circle but it is still never ending.... so.. no matter wat we will be able to face the tide of the friendships here and friendships yet to come for a long long time. Great poem Missy

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Tracey Collins 14 May 2006

nice poem about friendship, friendship should never be like a candle, because if it is the friendship will no longer be, because when the wax melt thier nothing left of the frienship.

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Benjamin A. Wellman

Benjamin A. Wellman

Jacksonville, FL
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