shanta young

Rookie - 69 Points (4/144/1998 / newark new jersey)

Friendship - Poem by shanta young

treasure your friendship
You make me laugh
I look for a gap
To give you a hard time
In the best possible way
I make you laugh too

If you're having a bad day
I'll tell you a joke
Or act like a clown
I'll make you laugh
You won't be upset long
If I have my way

If you need a hug
I'll happily oblige
If its real bad or real sad
I'll weep with you
Until you get through
I'll be there

We will share the load
Good, bad, happy or sad
This is friendship

Topic(s) of this poem: friendship


Poet's Notes about The Poem

this poem is about me and my friend Alex and how she mean the word to me.

Comments about Friendship by shanta young

  • (10/28/2015 11:17:00 AM)


    We will share the load
    Good, bad, happy or sad
    This is friendship.
    Nice write. Friendship well defined. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks.10 points.
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  • Rajnish Manga (10/28/2015 11:14:00 AM)


    So nice of you to have given friendship such a lovely treatment that makes it a divine experience lasting for ages. Thank you, Shanta. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 28, 2015



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