Friendship Destroyed - Cinquain Poem by Noah Body

Friendship Destroyed - Cinquain



Friendship
Golden starlight
Alter ego destroyed
Hated madness ever despair
Lonely

Friday, June 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
an attempt at writing a cinquain. Doesn't work well. I usually give no thought to my poetry. My fingers write it with little interaction from my mind, even surprising me most often. Writing structured poetry requires mental focus so I cannot just blank out an let what comes - come.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leah Ayliffe 13 June 2014

Simple but great. Really liked your word choice.

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