Thursday, April 1, 2010

From A Water Bubble Comments

Rating: 3.1

you hold me
in a water bubble
precariously on the
edge of your fingers
...
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indira babbellapati
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Raju Baruah 12 April 2010

...you hold me in a water bubble... brilliant verse...magnificent metaphor...sensitive appeal...make this piece beautiful. Thanks for sharing

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C. P. Sharma 08 April 2010

Wonderfully crafted with rhythmic beats and musical flow. like a bubble flow and make it glow what if it blows why think of woes in new bubbles again get aglow. CP

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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