From A Water Bubble Poem by indira babbellapati

From A Water Bubble

Rating: 3.1


you hold me
in a water bubble
precariously on the
edge of your fingers

frail are my limbs
frailer are my wings
multicolored rays
focused on me on
this unique stage

i whirled and whirled
to amuse you, my creator
at the end of a performance
the bubble closed me in

don't bring me back to life
is my earnest request to you
for i no longer can renew my
spirit to amuse you again!

01apr2010
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raju Baruah 12 April 2010

...you hold me in a water bubble... brilliant verse...magnificent metaphor...sensitive appeal...make this piece beautiful. Thanks for sharing

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C. P. Sharma 08 April 2010

Wonderfully crafted with rhythmic beats and musical flow. like a bubble flow and make it glow what if it blows why think of woes in new bubbles again get aglow. CP

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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