From Experience And Thereafter.......... Comments

Sonia, you do have the power of expression and you do well. I suggest you also give importance to the 'visual' treat of poetry - you would do lot better if you could work a little bit more on the visual construction. That shall attract loads of hits from other PH members on your pages. Your selection of the theme and then going about the narration is truly engrossing.

I really thankful (we readers) for this great poem worries on Big brothers of World ad their crimes... it a crime in wanting to once again re-enter- into the womb of the ever protecting bigger world? Will these two worlds ever meet! The smaller world is- grovelling The real flutter the World with this cries....Sonia we with you...