Frozen Tears Poem by Iris Rain

Frozen Tears



The days are forgotten
The nights are longer
When thoughts are the enemy
and memories are no longer welcome
There is no reason for the broken heart to continue
beating like everything was just as it should be

Frozen tears, striken heart, weary mind
Left in the lost land, like a single white rose
withering in the wild

So lost, so frigid, so missing you
Frozen tears, cast in the mould of my broken heart
Like the thousand, hundred minutes of thoughts
I used to bestow on you, stuck in a time frame, running, turning
over and over and over again

Frozen tears, like you would know
what it is that freeze a tear, and lock the pain within, forever
It is love found, and lost -
It is you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Loved the poetic emotion of this poem. Frozen tears, a heart so fragile yearning, not to be hurt beyond this point. Really enjoyed the read; D

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Apurva Jain 26 June 2010

'it is love found and lost, it is you' one of the best lines I've ever read... I've got nothing to say about this poem... :)

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Jean Dament 19 June 2010

A heartfelt love poem tha captures the pain of losing someone so well here. It had a nice naturel flow to it too. Thanks for sharing. In the last verse the 2nd line you have 'feeze'-it should be 'freeze' ok Spiritsong

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