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Fundamentalism

Rating: 3.9

Because the eye has a short shadow or
it is hard to see over heads in the crowd?

If everyone else seems smarter
but you need your own secret?

If mystery was never your friend?

If one way could satisfy
the infinite heart of the heavens?

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Susan Williams 10 March 2016

This is well-written in all ways a poem can be well-written. I realize that all members have their own scale to vote by, but 7.3? Really? To me the scale should run from at least an 8 to at most a 10. I preferred 9 myself as I am very stingy with 10's [which I gave to several of her poems]. I suppose it's irrelevant since it is just a number. But nothing about encouraging and discouraging is irrelevant to me

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