Gamble Of Love Poem by Aboutaleb Toupa Esfandiari

Gamble Of Love

Rating: 4.5


Legal or illegal
You are in my heart
No matter if you be
There or soon depart
This is a real love
For you, and that is all.
Pure, and simple in which
People seldom do fall.
I'm a man about it,
I say and I mean it
Although it's a gamble
And few surely win it.

Tuesday, December 24, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 27 December 2013

Lving is unpredictable for we are only human, but better to have loved and lost than not have loved at all!

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Marvin Brato 27 December 2013

Loving is unpredictable and not perfect....but better to have loved and lost than not have loved at all!

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Amirhossein Ahmadi 28 December 2013

Love is a good sense and i think loving is a chance for people... by love you can be better but sometimes this love make you depressed and bad.... and gamble of love is very nice...thank you very much.

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Baharak Barzin 27 July 2015

Simple but deep. Fearless but doubtful

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thank you very much, dear young petess compatriot. Lets make the word bow to Persia like it did in ancient times.

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?????? ????? 06 November 2021

سلام آقای اسفندیاری

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Garmon Evans 18 May 2020

load of bollocks really is

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A B Faniki 09 August 2019

A brilliant poem with the flare of originality n honesty.Thanks for such a love work. I can relate

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Ghazal Ebrahimzade 08 May 2018

fantastic and elegant pure feelings exposed through rimes

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 08 June 2016

Beautiful poem and beautiful Platonic love

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