Gathering Poetry Comments

Aloha RoseAnn.. like diamonds gently falling in quiet succession from this mind's hand. Eloquent and so deliciously offered... developing ideas and thoughts on merits of inner awakenings... How those better bards wish, yet fail to will, a better work of words... I know well the caustic nature of a perceivable flow of words, failing to ignite a line or stanza... much less continuing on to complete the wholesome gist or punning jest of a higher quality write... And this particular ending... heroic in simplicity... an and then you're done way of escaping your trials and triumphs'... My bet is this... one in hundred million would suggest this as enough... The majority of journeymen or women would kill for the skill to weave these larger and more complicated works... My wish is for the best to come, and boat loads of it... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two