Genesis Poem by Dzekashu Macviban

Genesis

Rating: 4.0


The unsteady familiar rhythm of known voices

Like some haunting siren song suffocates

My thoughts.Deep within the darkness of

The cave lies a punctured genesis.

With two voices piercing each other

I watched the changing scenes

And, in pure macho fashion, the rib was silenced.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
mengwi 14 February 2018

Add a comment.a nice poem but please I bead it analysis

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Oscar C. Labang 04 September 2009

This is a beautiful poem in which imagestic patterns are used to evoke ideas that are larger in scale than what is conveyed. Good poem. Good effort. Good imagery.

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A quite interesting poem to read, I really enjoyed the first couple lines, a moving image.

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Dzekashu Macviban

Dzekashu Macviban

Yaounde, Cameroon.
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